What I’ve Learned After Reading Hundreds of College Essays

 I’ve read a lot of college essays—hundreds, maybe thousands. And here’s what I’ve learned:

The best ones aren’t perfect. They’re personal.
They sound like the student—not like a polished adult voice, not like ChatGPT, and definitely not like someone trying to impress an imaginary admissions officer.

The Most Common Mistakes:

  • Writing a resume in paragraph form

  • Trying to guess what the reader wants to hear

  • Using a thesaurus on every word

  • Telling someone else’s story (parent, grandparent, coach)

The Essays That Stand Out:

  • Start with a moment, not a lesson

  • Show vulnerability and voice

  • Reflect instead of rehash

  • Sound like no one else could have written them

Colleges read thousands of essays. Most blur together. The few that stick are the ones that feel honest, specific, and grounded in real experience.

➡️ Want your teen to get started on the right track?
We’ll brainstorm, structure, and write together in Phase II—or during one of my small-group Essay Bootcamps. Reach out now to learn more.

Want your teen’s essay to stand out for all the right reasons? I guide students through brainstorming, structure, and revision—so they don’t feel stuck or alone.
📬 Let’s connect: highperformanceacademics@gmail.com or 847-309-2777
Or visit www.highperformanceacademics.com to get started.
—Dr. Jill | High Performance Academics

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